Looking for feedback on our upcoming page!

Love the concept!

This looks great! Suggestion: saw you have a website for Trash Panda, I would embed that link into the description of your PH landing page so people can learn more about your product if they want to continue browsing/access more information on your product.

Hi Julia, I've checked the landing page. It looks great!! I have a couple of suggestions: 1. Background is looking nice but at the same time, it is dominating the headline of that page. 2. CTA is not appearing in the first fold. We need to scroll down for the CTA. 3. If possible try adding personalization or powerful words to copy.

This is an amazing idea.

Looks interesting. I like the idea. Looking forward to your launch.

Nice page! Colourful, interesting. When everyone thinks of food, imagine it juicy too)🤤

Hi! 1) I would change the headline to something much less known to the public. Rather than canola oil or carrageenan, the absolute transparency would rather be "food additive" that goes under more intimidating scientific terms. I think people would be leaner to get the app because there isn't any other way to come as fast & effective as a scanner. 2) There are natural and synthetic food additives, and I would make sure to display my app making the difference between these two. 3) It must be me, but I would have rather gotten the image before the headline in the middle of the screen. The "Scan any food to get insight on ingredients quality" was enough to know what it does, and it's immediately clear what the app offers. If I needed to know more I would just then read more about it. 4) If the app offer alternatives to the product selected, I would advertise it as well. At least, adding the complete list of features within the app is at the bottom. You can also advertise the upcoming features. From this page alone, I don't know if your app does more than what's being displayed. Best of luck!

Love the concept and just subscribed! I think your copy is very clear and concise, overall great job! Only piece of small feedback I have is to maybe shrink the size of your hero image slightly so that your CTA is above the fold. Otherwise, amazing job! If you get a chance, I'd also love some feedback on our upcoming page for PlayerZero: https://www.producthunt.com/upco...

Hi Julia, two issues I can see with your page: 1) The headline doesn't really add any value to the page. Do you have a slogan/big idea about your project/promise etc that will create impact and make someone interested to keep reading? 2) The line "Ever looked at a food label.." states a problem/pain point. But the next line doesn't state clearly enough how it fixes that problem.. I am confused about how "Me being confused about canola oil" and "You delivering transparency" is a solution. Are you going to give me a detailed explanation of the ingredients? Information about the health benefits or risks? I would play around with the page order. Having the picture first "Scan any food to get insight.." Then have "Ever looked at a food label.." Then make sure the next sentence can explain the solution/benefits of the app. Good luck.

Congratulations on the concept. Picture is alright, if I can suggest one feedback - the headline can be better. It took a while for me to figure out okay this is what it is. If the same meaning can be conveyed in a readable simple line, would recommend it. Not everyone would spend more than 5 seconds to understand it.