Help picking our 1-liner

Sleek Pay

@ashrahman Thanks Ash!

Sarah Playford @sarah_playford

@ashrahman same

Darwin Binesh @darwin_binesh

Buy it with one click. - makes them click to find out how it works. Wow them with a good write-up. 1 click. Any store. Sleek Pay. - written like an apple headline (hopefully it sells as well). Good luck!

Sep 3, 2022

Sleek Pay

@darwin_binesh Thanks Darwin! Especially like the Apple-influenced version

Sep 4, 2022

Sandra Idjoski @sandra_idjoski

Sleek Pay

Thanks everyone who commented!!! Two winners have emerged, please reply to this comment for which is best: 1. Sleek Pay: Checkout from any store with 1 click 2. Sleek Pay: Amazon-like checkout with cashback, everywhere you shop

Sep 4, 2022

Andrew C.@seizefire

Thats that from me !

Sep 3, 2022

Collabwriting

Maybe something like "Checkout in 1 click - no matter where you shop." But I think all of them explain what you're making pretty well. 😄

Sleek Pay

@sandra_idjoski Thanks Sandra! Love the twist at the end

Qudsia Ali @qudsia_ali

WorkHub

I find the first one much more impressive and to-the-point. Moreover, I will be happy to support you on the launch day. Just let me know when you are up to this.

Sleek Pay

@qudsia_ali Thanks a lot, appreciate the feedback and support! We're planning to launch Wed Sept 7!

Rich Watson @richw

NVSTly: Social Investing

I liked the first one. Been having this struggle recently too, I know what I want to use but struggling with the wording a little A free social trading app where retail traders collaborate A free social trading app where retail traders can collaborate A free social trading app for retail traders to collaborate A free social trading app for retail trader collaboration A social trading app where retail traders collaborate (x3)

Sleek Pay

@richw thanks! Might be worth drafting some with slightly different language i.e. collaborate isn't the most clear action word, its a bit too resume-y for me. But I might not be the target you're conveying to