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    Help picking our 1-liner

    Daniel Baum
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    I'm launching Sleek on PH next week, and trying to pick our 1-liner. Which is the best? Votes / recommendations / edits encouraged! Thanks!

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    Sandra Idjoski
    Maybe something like "Checkout in 1 click - no matter where you shop." But I think all of them explain what you're making pretty well. 😄
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    Daniel Baum
    @sandra_idjoski Thanks Sandra! Love the twist at the end
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    Scott Kosmach
    Sleek Pay: Shop everywhere with 1-click convenience
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    Scott Kosmach
    Shop brick-and-mortar with 1-click convenience
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    Oscar Wehbe
    Sleek Pay: Making the web your one click shop.
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    Daniel Baum
    @oscar_wehbe Thanks Oscar! We're not a cart aggregator, so I worry about that being a misconception, but otherwise its a cool twist
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    Rich Watson
    I liked the first one. Been having this struggle recently too, I know what I want to use but struggling with the wording a little A free social trading app where retail traders collaborate A free social trading app where retail traders can collaborate A free social trading app for retail traders to collaborate A free social trading app for retail trader collaboration A social trading app where retail traders collaborate (x3)
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    Daniel Baum
    @richw thanks! Might be worth drafting some with slightly different language i.e. collaborate isn't the most clear action word, its a bit too resume-y for me. But I might not be the target you're conveying to
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    I find the first one much more impressive and to-the-point. Moreover, I will be happy to support you on the launch day. Just let me know when you are up to this.
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    Daniel Baum
    @qudsia_ali Thanks a lot, appreciate the feedback and support! We're planning to launch Wed Sept 7!
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    Sarah Playford
    Checkout from any store with 1 click.
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    Andrew C.
    Thats that from me !
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    Darwin Binesh
    Buy it with one click. - makes them click to find out how it works. Wow them with a good write-up. 1 click. Any store. Sleek Pay. - written like an apple headline (hopefully it sells as well). Good luck!
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    Daniel Baum
    @darwin_binesh Thanks Darwin! Especially like the Apple-influenced version
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    Daniel Baum
    Thanks everyone who commented!!! Two winners have emerged, please reply to this comment for which is best: 1. Sleek Pay: Checkout from any store with 1 click 2. Sleek Pay: Amazon-like checkout with cashback, everywhere you shop
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