Help picking our 1-liner

Daniel Baum
20 replies
I'm launching Sleek on PH next week, and trying to pick our 1-liner. Which is the best? Votes / recommendations / edits encouraged! Thanks!

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Ash Rahman 🎮
Love the first one.
Darwin Binesh
Buy it with one click. - makes them click to find out how it works. Wow them with a good write-up. 1 click. Any store. Sleek Pay. - written like an apple headline (hopefully it sells as well). Good luck!
Daniel Baum
Thanks everyone who commented!!! Two winners have emerged, please reply to this comment for which is best: 1. Sleek Pay: Checkout from any store with 1 click 2. Sleek Pay: Amazon-like checkout with cashback, everywhere you shop
Andrew C.
Thats that from me !
Sandra Idjoski
Maybe something like "Checkout in 1 click - no matter where you shop." But I think all of them explain what you're making pretty well. 😄
I find the first one much more impressive and to-the-point. Moreover, I will be happy to support you on the launch day. Just let me know when you are up to this.
Rich Watson
NVSTly: Social Investing
NVSTly: Social Investing
I liked the first one. Been having this struggle recently too, I know what I want to use but struggling with the wording a little A free social trading app where retail traders collaborate A free social trading app where retail traders can collaborate A free social trading app for retail traders to collaborate A free social trading app for retail trader collaboration A social trading app where retail traders collaborate (x3)
Daniel Baum
@richw thanks! Might be worth drafting some with slightly different language i.e. collaborate isn't the most clear action word, its a bit too resume-y for me. But I might not be the target you're conveying to
Oscar Wehbe
Thisapp: Your Calendars Future.
Thisapp: Your Calendars Future.
Sleek Pay: Making the web your one click shop.
Daniel Baum
@oscar_wehbe Thanks Oscar! We're not a cart aggregator, so I worry about that being a misconception, but otherwise its a cool twist
Scott Kosmach
Sleek Pay: Shop everywhere with 1-click convenience
Scott Kosmach
Shop brick-and-mortar with 1-click convenience
Sarah Playford
Checkout from any store with 1 click.