Landing page feedback requested!
Robin P.
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With all the talent here on PH, I'd like to get your feedback on what should be improved on the landing page of my upcoming venture. I'm good at fundraising but not that great in landing pages and UI. Here is the landing page: https://raisebetter.capital
Thanks!!
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Ingmar Klein@ingmar
Launching soon!
I like the opener. it's clear, easy to read and grabs my attention. the domain is also cool btw ;).
however, then the solution doesn't become clear to me. I understand the problem "Scouring the web endlessly for investor details?" but what's the solution to it?
when I keep scrolling down it starts looking more like a SEO-optimised page rather than user optimised. there's too much text that I don't want to read.
so, I'd suggest making the solution(s) to your problem super clear, in a 2 column format (h1 left, image right), and putting them straight after the opener (below the screenshot).
the three stakeholder benefits with icons are not grabbing my attention and I don't want to read them + they are also not positioned correctly. in the intro, you're talking to founders (I'm guessing your primary audience), you're stating the problem, but not the solution, and then you're talking to founders & investors. so, as a founder, I'm a bit lost here. I still don't know what is it that you're doing.
I hope this helps!
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