Any tips of how to make Coming soon page better? 🥹
Kate Kovbii
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Hi guys, so we're launching in late March but already have our Coming soon page - https://www.producthunt.com/products/assetspace-asset-management-system
Any tips on how to make it better?
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Mehdi Rifai@mehdi_rifai
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@mehdi_rifai Coming soon pages is like some kind of art, right? 😅
Impressive design, Kate!
I'm looking forward to the launch :)
@noel_rajakumar thank you so much for your support! 🤗
I'm a bit late here, I don't have much feedback other than I think the design looks nice and clean! I also have to say I appreciate your use of the 😏 emoji
@kayla_klein thank you so much! It's never too late for any helpful feedback, so thank you for joining this conversation ❤️
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i really like the design, too
but as for me, the wording is too much (like too many things all at once, without 'air')
and... too much commas to my liking :)
other than that, it's all good!
@maksim_holub1 got you! Thank you so much for your help! 😌
@maksim_holub1 thank you so much for your help! So you think shorter and simpler sentences would work better? 🥹
@kate_kovbii yes. they are easier to digest generally
TransferChain
I'm looking forward to it
@dogukan_tezcan thank you so much! ❤️
TheWorkSage
Maybe it's according to the user's screen, but on mine, I see that the words "offices" and "assets" are transferring from one row to the other.
If you can rephrase a bit and avoid the transferring, it would be a tiny bit more pleasant for the eye :)
Other than that, looks amazing - crossing fingers for your launch @kate_kovbii! We might even be on the same day, as we're also launching late March.
@veselin_kostov oh this does make sense! Thanks a lot! ❤️ And did you look at the page with your phone or laptop?
And oh my! What exactly do you launch! I’ll be happy to support 😌❤️
TheWorkSage
@kate_kovbii Checked it out on my laptop; 1920x1080 resolution. Hope that helps!
And I'm launching a marketplace aimed to connect people that are looking for career help, with those that offer it. Appreciate any support I can get :D
You can check more information here, if it sounds interesting - https://www.theworksage.com/
@veselin_kostov thank you so much for your help!
And good luck with your launch! Will be happy to subscribe to your Coming soon page and provide any help and support needed! ❤️
@veselin_kostov just added a small word to the description, and now it looks way better! Again - Thank you SO much for your help! ❤️
Hi Kate. Not everyone agrees, but I've always believed in the old mantra, "sex sells". As a person who pays a lot of attention to TV advertising, my simple recommendation is to replace your black background with alternating color photos of female and male models at work, with special attention to subliminally "suggestive" poses and angles.....just as the multimillion dollar ad professionals do. :-)
@pleasure_meditation, hehe, sounds like an interesting experiment to try out some day 🤔 Thanks for sharing your idea! 🤗
Hi Kate ! Design's cool 😄. Maybe I'm not sure I understand what "top of their stuff" means. Otherwise it's super nice. I definitely want to be notified on that launch 🥳
@emma_jeanpierre oh my, thank you so much!❤️ And thanks for noticing this shady wording! I'll do my best to come up with something more clear 😅 Again - thank you SO MUCH!