Share your landing page!
Pinar Engur
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Let's gather some feedback from each other under this thread. You can reach our page here: https://www.usebeforesunset.com/
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abdulmjeed @mjeed
soon www.mukrb.com
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We have a small one now: https://sortshorts.com
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Pinar, Thank you for this initiative!
Your looks really nice, design is perfect, as for me)
I would appreciate feedbacks about Woofz landing page – https://www.woofz.com/
BeforeSunset AI
@shakhmetava_natallia Wow! I loved your landing page! It is easy to follow and colors are great.
@shakhmetava_natallia great landing!
@pinar_engur Thank you!
Really like it! Mine is https://www.clickstack.io - deploy backed services without writing code
BeforeSunset AI
@brennen_barney Hey Brennen! It looks clean :) However, you can reduce the text a little and highlight the important parts.
Hey ! I'm going to review your landing in a reply. Here I leave my recipe cost calculator saas website that we are launching soon: https://mozzo.menu/
LaunchPedia
Your landing page looks good. However as there are some apps in this space, it would be great if you point out what are the key differences and what makes your product the go to one.
BeforeSunset AI
@karthik_tatikonda Thank you so much, Karthik! Yes, we will write some X vs. BeforeSunset blogs.
BeforeSunset AI
Merge
https://merge.dev is ours! We just launched a free plan to Product Hunt today!
BeforeSunset AI
@aaron_merge Good luck on the launch! I have just upvoted and commented!
Merge
@pinar_engur Thank you Pinar! Really appreciate the support there!
https://coinshots.com/news
you will love my landing page if you like reading and cryptocurrency.
Videodeck
https://www.videodeck.co/ - this is us, we are a video production service for Saas companies. We are actually about to launch a cool project on PH tomorrow 🤩
MakerFit
@heleana Great webpage and service your offer!!
Dan Kulkov Co-founder of MakerBox (on PH) says about the Above the fold (ATF) headline should; "Explain the value you provide."
A slight tweak on what you already have I think makes the argument for Videodeck;
"Win More Customers With Explainer Videos Done for You"
Just a suggestion. Best of luck with your new projects!
BeforeSunset AI
Videodeck
@paul_d_michaels2 Thanks so much for your input! We're still working on perfecting our messaging, so this is super helpful!
We actually just launched something new and pretty cool today on PH: producthunt.com/posts/saas-video-script-templates
I'd love to get your input there as well. Let me know in the comments what you think!
Videodeck
@pinar_engur Hi Pinar! Thank you so much for your positive feedback! I'm glad you liked it. We actually just launched today: producthunt.com/posts/saas-video-script-templates
I'd love it if you could check it and leave me some feedback on what you think! :)
LeadDelta professional relationships CRM
https://leaddelta.com/ - LinkedIn network manager.
Can't wait to hear your feedback.
BeforeSunset AI
@marko_rakic2 Hello Marko! Your landing page looks amazing. I also liked social proof. My only comment is that maybe you can reduce your text and highlight important points.
LeadDelta professional relationships CRM
Feedback to you, Pinar: I love the design and colors.
What I lack is to read what makes you different from other software like this (which features are unique to you).
BeforeSunset AI
@marko_rakic2 Thanks a lot, Marko! We will write "X vs. BeforeSunset" blogs soon.
NVSTly: Social Investing
heres ours https://tradehub.pro
BeforeSunset AI
MakerFit
🙏 Thank you in advance for your candid feedback!
EXERCISE OR EXCUSES
How Work-From-Home Professionals Get Fit in
5-minutes
https://go.exerciseorexcuses.com
@paul_d_michaels2 Site looks clean and really well designed. I think the biggest issues I see are based on specificity and believability/credibility.
1) What does it mean to get fit? Be able to run a 5k? Get a 6 pack? Lose 10+kg?
2) Do you have any before and after pics of people who got results?
3) The claim that you can cancel your gym membership needs a lot of proof to back it up.
Also, not the end of the world but the guy on the banner holding the phone seems a bit out of place for a fitness app.
Overall looks great though!
MakerFit
BeforeSunset AI
@paul_d_michaels2 Hey Paul! I like your idea and overall design of the landing page. I have a few comments:
Social proof is great but I think there should be one section for this. Instead of putting too much quotations, you can add some before after photos as @adeone said. Also, I would like to see what kind of messages you send with some images.
MakerFit
@tohxuezun I agree. I am looking into ways to do this so it helps tell the story. I'll update you once I have add them and get your feedback. Thanks! I
MakerFit
@pinar_engur Thank you! I will look into how I can implement your suggestions.
MakerFit
Great looking landing page.
I am questioning the main headline "Simple work management.
Maximum efficiency" as I don't feel like it is touching on any of my emotional pain points regarding "work management."
A couple of existing concepts on your page but not in the main headline struck me as more problem-solving and touching on your customer's pain points.
Here is a suggestion for an above-the-fold main headline:
"Making Your Workday Work for You in 5-Minutes"
An all-in-one time, budget, and project management platform to simplify your work management with maximum efficiency.
What do you think?
BeforeSunset AI
@paul_d_michaels2 Thank you Paul, I appreciate it. I will consider those valuable comments :)
It's really eye catching! I love that you put in your header all of the benefits using the tool.
One suggestion: I would mention the Free Trial in the header. You should remind people that you offer something (especially if it's for free!)
Here is our Landing Page. Any feedback is welcome :)
https://testifi.io/pulse/
MakerFit
@testifi Hi Daniel. Nice landing page.
There were a couple of things that stood out to me that are under utilized.
You headline seems pretty general. What does a revolution mean nowadays anyway?!
I think a headline that would catch my attention is "API testing in a few simple clicks" or
"Reduce costs, cycle times, and maintenance by 50%+" (delete "efforts" poor English)
These are both things that are eye catching and easy to understand in less than 2 or 3 seconds.
@paul_d_michaels2 Hi Paul, thank you for your comment! I appreciate the feedback and will share that with the team to improve the page accordingly.
BeforeSunset AI
@testifi Hello Daniel, thank you so much! Firstly, I loved your hero section which makes me scroll down and steps to use the product. Very clear :) Also, your team section is really good to show you care about teamwork. I have two comments. First, some of your sentences are not legible I don't know maybe because of my browser. I wish I can upload a screenshot here. Second, you can reconsider carousel sliderat the end of the page. Maybe it can be a grid consist of four columns :)
Socialays: Social Media Guard
Can't wait for the BeforeSunset's launch! 🙌
Feel free to check Socialays and upvote us on Product Hunt 🧡
BeforeSunset AI
@pinar_engur appreciate that a lot! Of course the most important thing to have a dark and light mode ;)
intribe | Tinder for Brand Partnerships
https://intribe.co
Always keen to get feedback!
@sven_radavics
Great questions.
>Curious about your question regarding free collaborations only? Is the pricing table not clear?
I meant between collaborators. For example, if I am a small company, can I pay to collaborate with a bigger company? Or do we have to both somehow do our research to figure out if a collaboration makes sense?
Basically from the standpoint of someone who might be interested in collaborating but has never done it before I am a bit confused as to how exactly it works, what to expect etc.
> re. Question 3 - do people wonder about that with regards to Tinder, LinkedIn etc. outside of Ts & Cs, is there anything you'd suggest?
I guess question 3 would tie in good with question 5 (I kinda listed stuff I thought of as I went through the page).
If there is a reputation/feedback system people can make an informed decision and take it from there!
@sven_radavics
Service looks good, I like the concept.
A few things that come to mind is:
1) What does the UI look like?
2) Is this for free collaborations only?
3) What happens if a collab goes wrong or people try to scam you etc.
4) If you collaborate, does this take place on your platform, or do you go offline to a different collaborating to do it.
5) Any sort of feedback system to know who has successfully collaborated and what sort of results/ROI they achieved?
A lot of potential objections and base information not covered on the landing page.
intribe | Tinder for Brand Partnerships
Pebble
@sven_radavics Nice concept. Maybe showing the discovery process on your landing page or a screenshot would help users better visualize.
BeforeSunset AI
@sven_radavics Easy to follow, liked it!