Roast our landing page 🔥
João Freitas
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We're launching soon on Product Hunt but before we do, we want to make sure that our landing page is as good as possible.
Here's the private link:
https://www.mezzolab.com/motion-...
- Do you get what the offer is?
- Who do you think this is for?
- What works and doesn't?
Roasts appreciated :)
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Anastasia Liamets@anliamets
Love the design and the idea!
I have some recommendations on how to improve it:
— As a PMM who collaborated with Motion designers weekly, not sure I understood the ICP sand use cases. Really nice that you mention use cases like onboarding, explainers etc, but focus more on benefits = why should I give it a try, not how it works.
— Explain a bit more about the value prop and core features/services BEFORE we go to pricing. Your CTA now is to check prices. I’d recommend you to give value first by letting users try how it works, show demo/video, book a demo or consultancy session. Can help you increase conversions.
Hope it helps ♥️
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Cant. Its actually really good. Also might come in handy in the future for us