♨️🔥 Roast My Landing Page (But Nicely)
AR Bell
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https://gametimehero-coming-soon.web.app/
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Phil Filippak@blisstweeting
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It's actually pretty nice! There are a few things I would marginally improve, though.
The most important among them IMO is the inconsistent typographic and paddings. For example, sometimes there is a period at the end of a caption, and sometimes there isn't — and the common designer wisdom is to get rid of periods in captions and headings. So I would recommend to just go over the page and make formatting and rules of punctuation 100% consistent. That will improve impression tremendously.
Another small thing is that I would make the pricing plans block larger. It's a little bit lost among the other things.
But overall it's a very good landing page!
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