Landing page design feedback
Gio Kakhiani
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Guys does this 👇 landing page make sense? I know it's dry but #lessismore, 'innit'? 😂
👉 Link to design: https://twitter.com/bestbubbledev/status/1493155401457668096
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André Weller@lostdesign
I do love the hands-on experience but it is a bit too "less is more" since I am completely lost on what I am seeing here and why this would solve a problem for me.
To whom do I share these progress stats?
Do I need to embed this or is it a standalone social media for makers?
Is it online or offline?
I guess you may need a bit more copywriting to tell what it is, or perhaps your tweet simply just showed off the demo and not the full landing page?
I think it's important to have these three key aspects at first sight:
- what does it solve for me
- why is it important for me
- how can I use it
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Simple Utm
@lostdesign Thank you so much for taking your time ✌️ Great points! I guess it's just a timeline builder at this point. Whatever use you'd find... I'd love to share the app with you to hear feedback if you don't mind? 🤙
I think a little more context is probably needed to know what your app actually does.
I'm also looking for some feedback :) shorturl.at/etwQS
Simple Utm
@bryce_murray I'm not the target market so can't give you the feedback on value prop. What I can suggest for sure is that you need more graphics. Images, gif or a short DEMO video. I'm not going to read all this stuff you have on LP.
Kinda like how copy.ai has it.
But the style is decent I like it. ✌️
Simple Utm
@bryce_murray Nice ✌️ What feedback are you looking for? I've pasted the link it made it shorter 😂 It works just as advertised 😂 Did you want me to look at something specific?
@giorgi_kakhiani I can't tell you how many people I sent the link to before someone finally told me this. NEVER USING A LINK SHORTENER AGAIN.
Here's my 2nd or 3rd iteration of my landing page. Mainly -> Does the value proposition make sense? Is the design distracting (I'm an engineer, and I know my biggest weakness is design). Is there anything to do to improve?
https://talent-manage.bubbleapps.io
@giorgi_kakhiani I like the little demo copy.ai has. Thanks for the suggestions.
Aspen - API Testing for macOS
Not sure what it is about (the landing page). Maybe ad 1 sentence describing what it is that you want to communicate. I don't know about what progress do you want me to share 😅
Simple Utm
@davor_kolenc Great feedback! I've took it into account and added another sentence 😂 And it still doesn't make sense to anyone 😂 I'd love to share the app with you to hear feedback if you don't mind? 🤙