I've just finished my product page on my website and would love some feedback

Jan Demiralp
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So, I've just finished designing the product page for the Life Compass and it is now live on my website. Any feedback would be most welcome. https://www.innercompass.academy/life-compass Thanks!

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Hi Jan! Love the page so far! I would say to improve, you can make many of the "how does it work", and "it's more than a system" into their own pages. That first page gets a little long scrolling so feels like a complicated solution! (even tho it isn't) To help with that, make sure the first half of the page is really formatted to grab people's attention, the Notion logo and brand name can be a bit smaller to bring the images up. Excellent job so far!
Lord Brian Dean-Madanamootoo
Hey Jan, from my personal perspective, i think the first thing you need to do is leave Webflow. Unless, you have some knowledge of HTML & CSS Webflow will seem great but way confusing. There are plenty of other webiste builders for entrepreneur to launch their first websites (I was amazed by the new Godaddy web builder, try it out) Then in general, i think that this current version of your website is what i personally call the "Idea Basket", it right now has EVERYTHING you want to do as an entrepreneur, which is great, but there's no way that anybody except you understands it. The scrapping phase should be next, Each and Every piece of information (1 line, text, image, emoji) that is on your website should make sense to 80% of your visitors. What i do through this phase is divide the site in questions, make about 10-15 questions per page (Home, About, Service etc) and go through a focus group, interview people. Remove all the extra information, and you should get a clean and clear website and CTA message. Hope that helped :)