I'm a tech copywriter and marketer. Share your websites and audience. I’ll give you my feedback.
Olena Bomko
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Jotam Dveer@jotam_dveer
Launching soon!
Hi Olena! www.figflow.io and we're focussing on product designers, owners and managers who manage product teams and backlogs.
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App Finder
Hi Olena, that's very nice!
https://skyica.com/appfinder is my website for App Finder, an advanced search engine for Android apps, soon for iOS also.
The audience is Android users in general, and especially of course "enthusiasts" who often search for mobile apps or games.
Lately, I had the most success for user acquisition with Reddit (see https://www.reddit.com/r/skyica, https://www.reddit.com/r/android...)
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@konrad_sx Hi Konrad,
I landed on your website and got lost. So many items :) Now I understand. But you should test it with users.
App Finder
@olenabomko I see what you mean. OK, I'll try to get feedback from users and see what to do about it. Thank you!
Hi, that sounds nice! My website - https://wiss-bundle.com/. The audience is Shopify store owners.
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@ruben_boonz yes, focusing on apps for Shopify. Let's connect on LinkedIn or X, maybe we can agree on some partnership
Hi, It's interesting. Here is my website https://go2more.com, caters to a wide range of small and medium-sized businesses in need of marketing, social media materials, and WordPress development and maintenance for a flat mothly fee.
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Thanks for the offer Olena.
Chrome plugin for Product Hunt: https://upperhunt.com/?nocache=8
I'd love you hear your feedback as a Product Hunt and LinkedIn power user.
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@olenabomko Thanks for the feedback Olena. Will I have your support when I launch next week? 🙂 That would genuinely mean a lot.
Regarding LinkedIn, its automation works differently from Twitter. It will help you connect and add a custom message quickly and conveniently. No DM involved. So it's all above board.
Amazing @olenabomko
https://usewhale.io/
Audience - Founders and VP Ops of small to medium-sized businesses looking to document, scale, organize their business and/or train their teams
Goals: increasing efficiency, team alignment, reducing errors, saving time, improving scalability, 'Unlocking the next level of growth'
Fears - Is this going to be another promise the earth tool that we don't use
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@lisa_steingold1 Overall, I like it. One of the best websites that people commented :) You even have an interactive demo. That's cool!
- I don't get your H1 in your unique value proposition.
- "Finally get the results you want!" And 3 claims.
But I want to see the evidence.
It's better to add case studies ("Reduce new hire ramp-up time by up to 25% LIKE *COMPANY NAME*")
It would be nice to have your feedback on our product website https://www.actitime.com/
This is my first website: https://www.urlxcode.com/, which is an online tool for handling URL encoding formats, mostly for developers.
Thank you for your reply.
Hi Olena, ours is ringly.io, it's an AI customer support caller for e-commerce
Wow, that's amazing Olena.
Any feedback on my messaging would be super helpful. I'm struggling a bit with that. Part of that is because the product serves multiple audiences.
My launch today (https://www.producthunt.com/post...) is focused on sales reps who need to update their CRM after customer/prospect meetings and calls.
Any thoughts are really appreciated!
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@olenabomko Amazing!
Here is our website: https://www.saleasy.io (AI powered end to end Outbound Sales platform)
Audience: Founders and VP, Director, Head of Sales and Marketing
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@sumitsahu009 Good website.
I don't understand your main picture.
You should add social proof.
A lot of big/fancy words. I would make your copy more concise.
ZeroThreat
Olena, I am curious to know your feedback
Website - https://zerothreat.ai/
My audience is mostly from IT companies, Cybersecurity Companies Developers, DevOps experts, and CISOs.
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@sarrah_pitaliya Okay, you sell to tech audiences. It's difficult :)
- Very big chunks of text. Difficult to read.
- A lot of big/fancy words
- Very big promises, but I want to see evidence (like 90% Reduced Manual Pentest)
- Add social proof
Hi @olenabomko !
Our website -> www.iterationx.com, our audience is mainly the Product trio : PM - Designer - Developer and anyone running a project and need a project management tool 😄
The LinkedIn Inbound Playbook
Good website.
A lot of big/fancy words. I would make your copy more concise. Especially your unique value proposition.
Would be cool to add case studies.
HI Olena,
https://getlazy.ai - getting ready to launch on PH
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@misha_lyalin1 Hi Misha,
I like it :) I understand what your product does. Maybe you already have customer testimonials? Would be cool to add them.
Thanks for offering your support. We are connecting remote workers to improve corporate culture in a remote setting.
Our audience are HR executives.
For the moment it's a teaser page, we are adding a setup guide, video and live demo this weekend. Looking forward for your feedback, really appreciate that!
https://www.crewting.com/product...
It would be really useful to hear your feedback, Olena! We have some ideas what to change, but it would be nice to hear more tips!
https://www.steerer.co/
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@michaelshver
- Very confusing unique value proposition.
- Be more specific (Unlock your utmost potential. Unlock your highest potential using expert strategies to elevate your performance to new heights.) It's empty sentences.
- Add testimonials as soon as you have them.
Hi Olena!
That's a fun thing to do, please roast us :D
https://klu.so/
Klu.so is an AI powered Search engine, which enables unified search across different cloud platforms like Notion, Slack, Gmail etc. from just one Search bar.
It also provides an AI assistance based on the integrated cloud data, for example if you need to sum up the information from the meeting or write a Product Newsletter.
Hey @olenabomko nice of you to offer to do this for the community!
Would be great to get your opinion/feedback on our website and product https://stayprivate.com/mail - we'll be launching on PH soon but any early feedback/opinion is always greatly appreciated!
With StayPrivate we are offering an organized, private, spam-free, ad-free alternative to the existing email solutions currently available (like Gmail, Outlook, FastMail, etc).
@olenabomko It's a stock research platform powered by AI, leveraging AI chatbot & technical analysis to offer daily stock recommendations and data summary. Check:https://intellectia.ai/
We're building a tool that streamlines online research for content marketers, consultants, and R&D teams.
Here's our solutions page for marketers: https://www.collabwriting.com/so... 😄
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@sandra_idjoski Cool. I'm from your target audience :)
I'd change your main picture.
Confusing CTA.
It would be cool to add case studies.
But overall, I like it :)
@olenabomko What would be an example of a clearer CTA? We've been experimenting with things, but still don't feel like we've hit the nail on the head with our messaging 😄