I asked Chatgpt to polish my PH description, here's what it gives me

Original: ``` A developer coming to the product world. Honestly I feel like I'm holding a hammer looking for nails, I view it as a fact, I only hope I can hammer well. Currently I'm trying to build a product that can help small teams/individuals use Notion more effectively. ``` Chatgpt: ``` 🚀 Aspiring Product Developer Embarking on a journey into the product realm, I find myself akin to a diligent artisan wielding a hammer, earnestly seeking the perfect nails. This isn't just a metaphor; it's my approach. With unwavering determination, I strive not just to swing the hammer but to master the craft. At present, my focus revolves around crafting a solution aimed at enhancing the Notion experience for small teams and individuals. The goal is simple yet profound — to empower users to leverage Notion's potential more effectively. Join me in this exploration, as we shape tools that streamline collaboration and productivity. Let's build better, together! 💻🔨 #ProductDevelopment #NotionEnthusiast #CollaborationMatters ``` I actually don't know what's better, in comparison my own version seems to plain and powerless, but the Gpt version feels strange to me, it's not the way I usually talk. What do you think? Should I learn from AI?