Honest feedback for your landing page - Post it!
Tsz Hoi Lee
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Hey all, I'm a designer/co-founder. Always love the PH community. Would love to take this chance to see each other's work and see how could we improve together!
Send your link below and let's give some honest feedback (I'll go first!)
**If you think my feedback is valuable, please upvote and allow more people have my 2cents!
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Imtiyaz @imtiyaz922
Curatora
Hello @tszhoi_19!
This is the reason for every community's growth. I really appreciate your generous offer.
Here is the link for our website: https://curatora.io
Let me see it from a designer's eyes.
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Jupitrr
@imtiyaz922 Very lovely website, I think I visited last week.
1. First flow is amazing. Tagline, White space, font size, CTA all decent.
2. Showing the demo/explain video front and forward in the second flow instead of a button might be a more user friendly way to understand your product.
3. The auto-scroll to display on "Discover/Curate/Publish" doesn't work tho, a hover to see different graphic might be a better alternative.
4. Explain content creation is a bit wordy and not that useful. Your TA should know what is content creation or else they are in the wrong place (not your user)
5. Some of the graphic is too colourful and not matching the clean design you're using. Mono colour might be better option.
Hope this helps!! All the best to your launch!!
Would love some feedback! http://start.withlloyd.com/feeli...
Jupitrr
@jdgusz Heyy, thanks for replying!
1. Perfect copywriting, but lack of a key visual in the first flow. Adding product demo or picture of people using the product would make a decent first glance for user.
2. Gradient colour on button is a bit extra. A normal use of high contrast colour is fine. Less is more.
3. Personal opinion but I feel like the purple colour can finetune a bit. Now a bit too saturated and too bright.
Mind Body Tab
Great initiative @tszhoi_19 - let me know what your thoughts are on https://paperless.io
Jupitrr
@ckpleiser Hey buddy your website is a winner. Everything is absolute class. One very minor opinion is placing the demo video as a popup instead of move to another tap might be better to keep ur users' feet on the same fantastic landing page.
But anyhow, a π― landing. I don't need your product, but I fall in love with it already!
Mind Body Tab
@tszhoi_19 Thanks for your kind words, mate! I'll follow your advice and will implement the pop up for the video to keep people on the same page.
Ambire Wallet
Hey Lee,
Please roast us: https://www.ambire.com/.
But mind this backstory. Our designer left us like 2-3 weeks before launching this landing page, so we had to do all "design" ourselves and it was a total improvisation. Curious what you'll say though :)
Jupitrr
@imanchev Actually not bad for this given context. Great layout and information architecture.
1. Could improve on font use (fontweight + size) (some too big some too small)
2. It is a bit too wordy
3. I'm not entirely familiar with crypto wallet so I found some wordings hard to understand. (See if you could try to talk like talking to a 5yr old)
Good luck!!
@primoz_erjavec viewing it on laptop. I would get rid of the hamburger button. Better to have the menu options visible. The buttons for the products you're selling is inconspicuous. Text over video is a little annyoing. Hope this helps!
Research AI
Hello Lee Tsz Hoi. Thanks for doing this. researchai.co
Product Hunt
We updated our landing page for this very occasion ;-)
https://www.producthunt.com/
Sales Sparrow by True Sparrow
@product_at_producthunt β€οΈ the rotating catch phrases. Is the next π¦ here?
Jupitrr
@product_at_producthunt
Oh god, I didn't expect this and I wouldn't dare to put comment on the Mighty PH. But there're some minor stuff I did notice.
1. The blue filter "featured" button is too eye-catchy (the only blue on the page and its sharp blue) Off-focus to user from project.
2. Love the borderless design, trendy and clean. I would make the upvote button pop when hover (colour change) instead of an orange overlay to encourage higher conversation on CTA:upvote.
3. The hidden open a new tab button next to project name is not quite intuitive. It feels like a share button turns out just open on new tab. A tool tip when over might works more seamlessly in this case.
4. Removed the ranking on the outside, also removing the competitive vibe among project. Good initiative but people might be quite sad if they're outside of 5th anw.
5. Rainbow colour skeleton loading, just lovely isn't it?
Those are my little 2cents that doesn't even deserved. PH has been a great place for startup and builders! Thanks a lot for this!
Troopr
I would really appreciate a feedback on our new page https://www.jiraslackintegration... , Thanks in advance
Price2Spy
Great discussion, Lee!
Check out https://botmenot.com/ - I'm always looking for some feedback!
Brew Money | Take control of your crypto
@price2spy Looking forward to the tool. I think one thing you can do differently is maybe highlight the benefits of bot protection on the top fold itself. Ofcourse you don't need that if most of the audience who land on your page are already well aware of it in which the focus can be on how your tool is the best out there
Jupitrr
@price2spy you might need a more fancy design if you try to sell to small startup or B2C user. (Proper revamp needed) But if it works for B2B then it is not the first thing you need to do for the project!
Price2Spy
@tszhoi_19 Thanks for the feedback! Actually got a couple of interesting changes in the works currently!
AI Image Upscaler by Upscale.media
Would be happy to get some feedback: erase.bg
Jupitrr
@jeet_bhanushali
Congrats on ranking top on your launch! (Any tips? aha)
1. Very nice landing page with cool dark mode
2. Interactive component also easy try out is a winner
3. Key image could be more high-res, now a bit blurry
4. I found having CTA on every section a bit packed and distracted. (Esp the second flow with " Download High..." that section is a bit redundant) Would be great to go straight to the interactive drag effect.
Overall very decent and looking forward to the creative profile element!
Tether
Would love some feedback! http://tethered.dev/
You the man, thanks Lee!
Jupitrr
@dan__cleary Hey Dan, great landing page! However, I do find it not persuasive enough to sell your product! Understanding it is a product requires whole team effort (between founders, QA, tech, design). You should highlight how easy it can get onboard, or else I would think it is too annoying to setup stuff all over again. I think you could take a lot of reference from Linear's landing page.
btw Great product, love it. Hope to hear more from you some day!
Tether
@tszhoi_19 Thanks so much for the feedback Lee, I really appreciate it. If you ever need any feedback or anything feel free to reach out!
Brew Money | Take control of your crypto
Hey Lee,
Great initiative. While we are redoing our Home Page, would love to know the community's thoughts on Brew
https://brew.money
Jupitrr
@archisman_das
1. Love the tagline works well with the visual
2. I think fin-tech product can't be too design/ trendy. A great barrier of product like this is trustworthy. Try to take reference of bank might be better way to go than take reference from other B2C app. (pictures works well I think)
Hope it helps! All the best.
Wellbee
Would like some feedback from mine: https://wellb.ee/
Zappi Ad Predictor
Brew Money | Take control of your crypto
Jupitrr
Hey @germa ! Thanks for replying.
1. Overall a very nice landing page.
2. Also great feedback from Archisman about "crowd". Business owner/ don't seek their teammates as crowd I would say.
3. The key visual can be improved. Right now only the "survey" component makes senses to me. "Thank you" message doesn't explain a lot in this scenario. The circle graph is almost meaningless unless I scroll down to the data part.
4. Last one, quite personal from me but I would avoid using #000000 Black with other colourful graphic you are using. Try a bit light in black or pick another key colour for CTA button which could bend it nicely with yellow background. (notice your H1 colour is different from H2 tho haha)
Thanks for letting me comment on it! Good work!!
I would love to know your feedback. It's my company's website. https://www.cerebruminfotech.com/
We are a Software Product Development Company and have experience in developing Apps like on-demand delivery app, on-demand home-service app, etc.
Jupitrr
@jaskiran_kaur It is too packed with too many things to look at a glance. You would like people to focus on one point and read with a flow!
AtomPay
We have a ship landing page as well! Would love your feedback. https://www.producthunt.com/upco...
Thank you! π
Jupitrr
@joannakurylo your own landing is better than the ship one!! Nice use of colour. But the 1, 2, 3 steps order is wrong when it's in two columns. Put the CTA centre also helps conversion!
AtomPay
@tszhoi_19 Thank you for your feedback!! Do you think there's any added benefit to having a ship landing page and a main landing page? or should I just stick with mine that I originally built (BTW I built mine using Typedream )
Jupitrr
@joannakurylo I think having your main one is more than enough! Stick with one avoid confusion and better for you to track data.
Poppins
Would love to hear what folks think about this? browny points for honest feedback and how we can improve! https://www.poppins.me/
Jupitrr
Hey @mishra_mayank, thanks for replying.
1. Love the poppins idea, great use case.
2. Everything on the landing page is too big because it is not a responsive web(?), feel too overwhelming with all the big font and component. EVERYTHINGISTOOPACKEDLIKETHIS
3. Overall need to improve on information hierarchy and make better decision on layout, fontsize, fontweight. Learn how to use white space like @imtiyaz922 's https://curatora.io!
Great work on the product for real, easy to understand, (Sad, Im a non-TA tho not using Slack anymore) Good luck!!!
Awesome thread, thank you! Any feedback on my landing page for WellPaid? https://www.getwellpaid.com/
Zappi Ad Predictor
We revamped our landing page after a PH launch - would love some feedback!
https://www.zappi.io/app/digital...
Jupitrr
@nik_hazell Hey! Thanks for replying.
Overall a very decent landing page. Great display of video demo. Nice use of colour and contrast. Few points I would love to add on:
1. The Tagline is a bit plain, doesn't make a "Aha-ha" moment for user. Instead explain what are you in phase, you could try with what value you bringing to user or the actual use case. Such as "Test out your Ad video", "Predict how your ad will perform". Users are not investors, they don't get buzz word like AI-powered.
2. First sentence about "coming the first time" basically not useful for first time comer. It works for big brand when they have deep branding and community. Simply saying How it works (second sentence) is perfect. Less is more.
3. Overall quite wordy is some part. Used thin font to avoid the heaviness but still I skipped some parts because it is just too long.
Hope this help! All the best.
Hi Lee! Hope I'm not too late here:) Love this idea. This is my homepage: www.gotolstoy.com and this is my Ship upcoming page: www.producthunt.com/upcoming/tol...
Would appreciate any feedback!
Tolstoy
@keren_brickman heres a link to our app as well (we're free!) would love any copy feedback: app.gotolstoy.com
Jupitrr
@keren_brickman Sorry I missed your comments! Hope it is not too late for this as well!
Awesome Product, even more awesome landing page. It is almost perfectttt. I think animation is a bit too extra for those in the bottom of the page (cause people scroll faster and faster after first two flows)
For content-wise, I struggle a bit to understand "face-to-face convo" when the demo video is a button-clicking interaction. For quite a sec, I was thinking so is this also video call as well (?)
All the best to your work! Also great to see you hanging around in PH community!
Gmail To Slack
Would love to get feedback for https://legitmailbox.com . I have launched recently & got visitors as well but unable to get users signing up via RapidAPI. Would love to improve.
@rupjyoti_nath i think its a bit to cluttered. Less is more. Too much text with very little separation. I would suggest adding separate pages for pricing etc. Focus on the main message on the main landing page.