Hi all, can you roast my teaser page?

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I want to improve it, and any feedback will do

https://www.producthunt.com/products/thrive-37d71455-c6f5-4464-a22b-035116036e93

Julien Zmiro · Accepted Answer

It's working pretty well congrats! Maybe the first sentence "Transform your fitness journey with Thrive!" isn't really necessary and removing it could shorten your description but that's a tiny detail.

Also, I've followed your teaser page! Feel free to follow mine, we're launching next week.

Senthilnathan RM · Answer

Looks good, James. I'd like to change the UI image in the top left as it feels bland (just a guy looking at the camera). Maybe, add a UI screen instead? Just a suggestion! Anyway, have subbed for your launch :) Here is ours - https://www.producthunt.com/prod... :) Let me know what you think!

Zulfi Husain · Answer

I think its pretty good, quick and to the point. Pretty understandable, from my perspective, a fitness app that also has one-on-one coaching features

James Sukosd · Answer

@zmiro thank you so much for your kind words and for following our progress. You make a valid point, and we'll definitely consider your suggestion to remove it. Every detail counts in crafting a concise and impactful description.

Definitely will sub, I can't find it though, can you link it below?

James Sukosd · Answer

@senthil99nathan Thank you for your feedback and for subscribing to our launch, it's greatly appreciated! I understand your suggestion about the UI image in the top left corner. It was to showcase a video call with the trainer to emphasize the interactive aspect of the platform.

I'll definitely take your suggestion into consideration and may even follow your lead with your page. I like the graphic as it showcases the UI and your slogan on top.

Senthilnathan RM · Answer

@james_sukosd , glad to hear and thanks!

James Sukosd · Answer

@farjana thanks for the kind words. Definitely sounds interesting, add me on LinkedIn so we can chat through there.

James Sukosd · Answer

@zhusain1 thank you so much, that's what we wanted. Something clear and to the point. I appreciate the feedback.

Julien Zmiro · Answer

@james_sukosd Ah it's because we're launching today! producthunt.com/posts/askmore

Hi all, can you roast my teaser page?

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