Any tips on how my landing page could be better?

Hi @carter_barnett, first of all love the concept. Disrupting personal stylist for men is great. An untouched market with not much tech competition. Well done! Here is my feedback about your LP: - I like the color choices and the font. - I would recommend reviewing the copy. There is too many words. I think your sentences should be more concise and less descriptive. A few sentences on the key benefits and how you product works should do it (I like your how to btw). - If you have happy customers speaking about your product, I would add them to your LP Here are 2 LPs I like for inspiration: https://linear.app/ https://www.beehiiv.com/ Best of luck!

I hope this feedback helps: - Remove product hunt badge as there's a low number of social proof here - Branding: colour with gradient doesn't look like it's aim for men - As this is a service, more images will help users image what the service is like (imagine selling a travel product, lot's of aspirational photos) - As this product is for men, I feel that a tongue and cheek approach to copywriting might resonate with your audience and differentiate the product (my assumption) for example "We believe every man deserves to look and feel his best," sounds like a product for women not men. - Can you condense your messaging? I feel the large blocks of text may be good at telling the story but remember you only have like 20 seconds of someones attention -- visuals help scan and get the message across quicker. Love that you used Typedream, my favourite tool to get something up quickly.

Have you tried different hero headlines? I sense room for improvement there. I'd think of using something other than "affordable" and "effortless", they seem like filler words and not the core value. Happy to connect and deep dive further!

https://www.julian.com/guide/sta... This has been suuuuuper helpful for me when making landing pages. At the end of the day, absolute clarity of messaging is king.

The thing that sticks out to me is the blurry face pic of the man. It seems to me that he is not proud to represent your product or business. Either that or he has a privacy issue. Those pics are a bit low quality as well. I would suggest working on the example pics, as that is the primary selling point - for me at least.

I think it needs to include the following - ☆ Unique selling points of the product - The core features of the product - Customer voice & customer stories (if you already have users) - ☆ Pricing plan - ☆ How to reach the team: Twitter, Email, Intercom, Discord... etc - Some related information such as Help Center, Blog, Roadmap - Information hidden under the water: SEO, GA ... etc. Describe in concrete and common language to help users understand your product more easily, without overly abstract summaries

Hey Carter, here is my input with your landing page. You idea is great, a service men need and it will sell. This is just my input, doesn't mean it is right its just another perspective to give you. Something to think about. ** Feedback One ** Your Ideal Customer Profile should be more targeted, right now it's for men which is generic, there are heaps of men in this world in all social rankings. Try targeting people who need to look good and have money to spend and move away from an affordable solution. It's better to have 10 customers paying you $1000 10X1000 = $10,000 then 10 customers paying you $399 10X399 = $3,990 ICP: CEO, Executives, Directors. Also, in your copy it says for men and women after the headline so that is confusing, seems like it's ChatGPT generated and needs some refinement. ** Feedback Two ** Hero text, if you change your ICP then it could be more of an offer right away. Here is an Example H1: Dress like a man known for his suave demeanor, high intelligence, and business skills H2: I help CEOs look their best in 3 days without having to worry about what to wear daily. ** Feedback Three ** Cold outreach to drive attention to your landing page. This is done via cold email, if you would like to chat about that process reach out on my twitter @heynigee ** Feedback four ** Overall too much text to read, try to add in videos and even testimonials.

This video from Neil Patel is really good. I recommend watching it