Which one is better as a tagline for hengam.io? and why?

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here is the link to the product: 
https://www.producthunt.com/posts/hengam

TL Robinson · Accepted Answer

Hey, I get an error message when I click the provided link. 
I really like what you're working on. It's critical for us product owners. If I thought about how I'd see your product as a branded commercial, I'd look for something to stick in my head. I hope you don't mind that I've proposed an additional tagline for hangam.io..."Keep 'em coming back". Thoughts?

Jillian Tohber Leslie · Answer

Clear, concise, and something I'd want!

MohamadReza Rahmani · Answer

@tl__robinson The correct link is here...
https://www.producthunt.com/posts/hengam

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@jillian_tohber_leslie1 
Thanks,
As I can't see your personal response, please tell me which one do you prefer?

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@tl__robinson 
Hi Robinson,
Thanks for your note, I updated the link.
Also, I added your suggestion as our new tagline to see how it works. ;)

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@jillian_tohber_leslie1 Thanks

Pavel Litvinko · Answer

"truly engage" is too generic and could mean almost anything, "Stop users from uninstalling" is much better

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@zoezoefay 
Hi Zoe,
I appreciate your taking the time to answer my question. It has really helped me

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@pavellitvinko_com 
Hi Pavel,
Thanks for your prompt response

TL Robinson · Answer

@mrzrm Thank you!

Jillian Tohber Leslie · Answer

I like the one that says, "Stop users from uninstalling..."

Zoe Fay · Answer

When you write copy go for short, appealing and use frontloading. Tell me what it does. Frontloading text means tell me the important information first. Most people just scan read quickly. You need to capture their attention. Although 'stop users from uninstalling your app' makes it sound like you will prevent customers / app users from making an autonomous choice, bit draconian. The suggestion above of "keep 'em coming back" is nice.

Which one is better as a tagline for hengam.io? and why?

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