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Roast my landing page 🔥
I've reached a significant milestone in this transition to the life of an indie hacker: I've completed my first landing page 😱. I'm very happy!
https://www.oniva.io/
Can you suggest improvements?
Feel free to be brutally honest. I can take the criticism. 😉
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Hanna from Niceboard
Looks great! Would change the main CTA to be 1. bigger and 2. lead to a demo/how it works/try for free.
Most people visiting your site aren't ready to get started immediately. They likely first want to see how it works and be assured that it's free.
I think I would have 2 CTA's similar to those: Try for free/Start for free & See demo/how it works
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1. Watch out for hero text, heading, and subheading text size. I think it's very small and hard to draw attention to.
2. Fix the design alignment