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Roast my product page?
Hi everyone! I'm planning to have my first launch in a couple of weeks, and I'd appreciate your feedback.
Here's a link to my product page:
https://www.producthunt.com/post...
What can I do to make this page better? I'm especially interested in what I can do to gain followers and get more upvotes on the day of launch!
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Tania Bell / Product Delights
Hey Dan, thanks for asking (I'm stealing this approach for my launch! ).
had a quick look - it's kind of really hard to get what the product does quickly.
I
- scrolled thru,
- read a lot of text
- clicked thru to your site
and still I don't really get a clear idea of what your product does.
'Get back to the work that matters.' doesn't tell me anything about the product.
the list of features doesn't add up to a coherent pic of what the product will help me with.
happy to look at v2 if you decide to update the page b4 the launch.
Tania
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@mr_tariq_waseem_ Thank you for your feedback, Mr. Tariq! I made some updates. What do you think now?
I'd add a section on why this is different from other similar tools. Right now, I get what it does, but I'm not totally sure why I'd pick this over something else.
Launching soon!
@m_hassan_sajjad Thank you for this! I've added some commentary on this to the demo, as well as to the first comment. Do you think that makes it better?
Would love to see a quick demo or GIF at the top. A static image is fine, but an animation showing how it works would make a huge difference.